one normal day at school i found a path way i wondered if it lead to another demenchon. i went down the winding trail and , then it sarted to go dark i could not see then i touch the wall to gide my way out of the mistical trail of human bones.when i felt the wall it was like blood driping down my arm i was so perified. i tried to open the door but just wont fuge. so i went back down the horid stear case, THEN something touched my sholder i lit a torch and saw... A MUMMY that was an achent worryer it was creepy and it had a zombie kitten called molly and a zimbie bunny called orio not the biscait a name!
My Reflection
I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing.
I found this easy because I planned out my story in my head before I wrote it.
In this activity I had to write 100 words and try to make it interesting by using three or more interesting adjectives.
My next steps in my writing are to use capital letters at the start of my sentences and make sure my spelling is correct.
2 comments:
Amazing work Narnni. Just remember to add your capital letters! Best BFF ever!
Great job on your 100 word challenge Aiyana, you have chosen a good next step for your writing. Keep up the good work!
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