Comparing a traditional and fractured fairy tale

My Reflection: I have been learning to compare a traditional and fractured fairytale. I found this easy/tricky/hard because, i found it easy because i know what i was writing In this activity I had to choose a fairy tale then needed to writ fractured pits simaler and originle
My next steps in my writing are to try useing all the boxes and in each circile even

Hokey Skills

hokey skills!

Here are some photos of my doing Hockey Skills.
We were learning to play Hockey and control our sticks. We were learning different skills like Indian Dribbling.
I enjoyed juggling the ball on my stick.
My next steps are to try and use the flat side of my stick in Indian Dribbling.

What was that I could feel

one normal day at school i found a path way i wondered if  it lead to another demenchon. i went down the winding trail and , then it sarted to go dark i could not see then i touch the wall to gide my way out of the mistical trail of human bones.when i felt the wall it was like blood driping down my arm i was so perified. i tried to open the door but just wont fuge. so i went back down the horid  stear case, THEN something touched my sholder i lit a torch and saw... A MUMMY that was an achent worryer it was creepy and it had a zombie kitten called molly and a zimbie bunny called orio not the biscait a name! 

My Reflection
I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing. I found this easy because I planned out my story in my head before I wrote it. In this activity I had to write 100 words and try to make it interesting by using three or more interesting adjectives.

My next steps in my writing are to use capital letters at the start of my sentences and make sure my spelling is correct.